tutorial: Improve grammar

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Hello,
In this guide we'll build a simple web blog in V.
In this guide, we'll build a simple web blog in V.
The benefits of using V for web:
- A safe, fast, language with the development speed of Python and
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touch blog.v
```
First let's create a simple hello world website:
First, let's create a simple hello world website:
```v
// blog.v
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not an MVC framework however.)
As you can see, there are no routing rules. The `index()` action handles the `/` request by default.
Vweb often uses convention over configuration, and adding a new action requires
Vweb often uses convention over configuration and adding a new action requires
no routing rules either:
```v
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<img width=662 src="https://github.com/vlang/v/blob/master/tutorials/img/time.png?raw=true">
>You have to rebuild and restart the website every time you change the code.
In the future Vweb will detect changes and recompile the website in the background
In the future, Vweb will detect changes and recompile the website in the background
while it's running.
The `.text(string)` method obviously returns a plain text document with the provided
The `.text(string)` method returns a plain text document with the provided
text, which isn't frequently used in websites.
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No need to create view models just to pass data, or use an unsafe and untyped
alternative, like C#'s `ViewBag["message"]`.
Making all action's variables available in the view may seem crazy,
Making all action variables available in the view may seem crazy,
but V is a language with pure functions by default, and you won't be able
to modify any data from a view. `<b>@foo.bar()</b>` will only work if the `bar()` method
doesn't modify `foo`.
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Now let's display some articles!
We'll be using V's builtin ORM and a Postgres database. (V ORM will also
support MySQL, SQLite, and SQL Server in the near future.)
support MySQL, SQLite, and SQL Server soon.)
Create a SQL file with the schema:
```sql
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### JSON endpoints
This tutorial used the traditional server side rendering. If you prefer
This tutorial used the traditional server-side rendering. If you prefer
to render everything on the client or need an API, creating JSON endpoints
in V is very simple: